- A loud phone rang in the middle of the lecture.
- In the middle of the lecture, a phone rang that was very loud.
- A phone that was very loud rang in the middle of the lecture.
- Both A and C are clear improvements.
No category found.
- He read almost the entire book in one day.
- Almost he read the entire book in one day.
- The entire book was almost read by him in one day.
- In one day, he read almost the entire book.
- My brother finally threw out the fruit after rotting in the fridge for a week.
- After the fruit had rotted in the fridge for a week, my brother finally threw it out.
- My brother finally threw out the rotting fruit in the fridge for a week.
- After a week, my brother threw out the fruit rotting in the fridge.
- The research paper about genetics was published in a journal.
- Published in a journal, the research paper was about genetics.
- In a journal, the research paper about genetics was published.
- The journal published the research paper about genetics.
- The teacher explained the concept with a diagram to the students.
- With a diagram, the teacher explained the concept to the students.
- Both A and B are grammatically correct and clear.
- The teacher, with a diagram, explained the concept to the students.
- The exam results were opened, hoping for the best.
- Hoping for the best, he opened the exam results.
- The exam results, hoping for the best, were opened.
- He opened the exam results hoping for the best.
- The new drug can cause side effects in some patients that are serious.
- The new drug can cause serious side effects in some patients.
- In some patients, the new drug can cause side effects that are serious.
- Serious side effects can be caused by the new drug in some patients.
- In the morning, the patient told the doctor that he was feeling better.
- The patient told the doctor in the morning that he was feeling better.
- The patient, in the morning, told the doctor that he was feeling better.
- Both A and B are clearer than the original.
- On television last night, I saw a documentary about dinosaurs.
- I saw a documentary on television last night about dinosaurs.
- Last night on television, a documentary about dinosaurs was what I saw.
- Both A and B are clear and correct.
- The report was finally finished working late into the night.
- Working late into the night, she finally finished the report.
- The report, working late into the night, was finally finished.
- She finished the report working late into the night finally.
- The man parked the car with a broken headlight.
- The car with a broken headlight was parked by the man.
- The man with a broken headlight parked the car.
- Both A and C are possible, but B is clearest.
- The book must be read to understand the topic.
- To understand the topic, you must read the book.
- The book, to understand the topic, must be read.
- Reading the book is how to understand the topic.
- The student's essay covered in red ink was returned by the professor.
- Covered in red ink, the professor returned the student's essay.
- The professor returned the student's essay, which was covered in red ink.
- The essay was returned by the professor covered in red ink to the student.
- Chasing the cat, the vase broke.
- The vase was broken chasing the cat.
- While chasing the cat, he broke the vase.
- He chasing the cat broke the vase.
- The pharmacist gave a prescription to the man that was difficult to read.
- The pharmacist gave the man a prescription that was difficult to read.
- The prescription that was difficult to read was given to the man.
- Both B and C are correct.
- To be well-prepared, your notes must be reviewed thoroughly.
- To be well-prepared, you must review your notes thoroughly.
- You must review your notes thoroughly to be well-prepared.
- Reviewing your notes thoroughly is required to be well-prepared.
- The patient explained his symptoms to the doctor with a calm demeanor.
- With a calm demeanor, the patient explained his symptoms to the doctor.
- The patient with a calm demeanor explained his symptoms to the doctor.
- All are grammatically correct.
- Looking through the microscope, the cells were clearly visible.
- The cells were clearly visible when I looked through the microscope.
- When looking through the microscope, I could see the cells clearly.
- The cells, looking through the microscope, were clearly visible.
- The new student was sitting next to my friend with red hair.
- The new student with red hair was sitting next to my friend.
- Next to my friend sat the new student with red hair.
- Both B and C are correct.
